Monday, August 1, 2011

Pain..

Pain in my Heart..

when i lost to the world
i feel the pain in my innocent heart
when i know
i am alone
i feel the pain in my soul
when i remember the memories
of wonderful past
i feel the pain to my spirit
when feel i wont get that life back
my heart cries,
i feel the greatest pain in universe


this poem is about pain.it is common for everything

3 comments:

  1. The pain is there to teach you, something about life. To rid yourself of the pain, you must look within and learn the lesson it is trying to teach you.
    I don't know if you understand this or, you already know it and are writing about it. Your prose is lovely.

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  2. sometimes writing about a painful experience helps... hope it does ~

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  3. thanks a lot for the comments.i know tht pain teach us lessons in fact greatest ones we ever can teach in next day tht pain is wonderful memory.

    ReplyDelete

Monday, August 1, 2011

Pain..

Pain in my Heart..

when i lost to the world
i feel the pain in my innocent heart
when i know
i am alone
i feel the pain in my soul
when i remember the memories
of wonderful past
i feel the pain to my spirit
when feel i wont get that life back
my heart cries,
i feel the greatest pain in universe


this poem is about pain.it is common for everything

3 comments:

  1. The pain is there to teach you, something about life. To rid yourself of the pain, you must look within and learn the lesson it is trying to teach you.
    I don't know if you understand this or, you already know it and are writing about it. Your prose is lovely.

    ReplyDelete
  2. sometimes writing about a painful experience helps... hope it does ~

    ReplyDelete
  3. thanks a lot for the comments.i know tht pain teach us lessons in fact greatest ones we ever can teach in next day tht pain is wonderful memory.

    ReplyDelete