Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Rain poem

Alone in Rain


it is going to raining
dark clouds every where
light has dissapear
strong wind is blowing


no any friend is with me
i am alone in rain
every body have gone
they have left me alone in this dark avenue


it is raining
it is raining hard
and i cant cover it
i cant stop it
but i can wait
yes,i am waiting until it stop
coz i know it will stop soon


                                 Umesh Moramudali


My Review   :     This is a poem about young guy in rain.he was there when rain started
now its getting heavier and heavier. but he said he cant cover it I try to indicate through this poem
he is amidst lots of problems and problems keep coming at him.my friend left me in dark avenue means that there are no one to share his sorrow.but he believes time will solve this problem.thats why he is waiting until rain stop.
he knows it will stop.because life is not only suffer.life is not a bed of thistle rods.
so I try to give the message that don't worry or cry happiness will come your way

1 comment:

  1. That's so wonderfully deep and powerful! I too have been left in the rain. In that dark avenue. But I wait it out as well. Happiness always prevails. :)

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Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Rain poem

Alone in Rain


it is going to raining
dark clouds every where
light has dissapear
strong wind is blowing


no any friend is with me
i am alone in rain
every body have gone
they have left me alone in this dark avenue


it is raining
it is raining hard
and i cant cover it
i cant stop it
but i can wait
yes,i am waiting until it stop
coz i know it will stop soon


                                 Umesh Moramudali


My Review   :     This is a poem about young guy in rain.he was there when rain started
now its getting heavier and heavier. but he said he cant cover it I try to indicate through this poem
he is amidst lots of problems and problems keep coming at him.my friend left me in dark avenue means that there are no one to share his sorrow.but he believes time will solve this problem.thats why he is waiting until rain stop.
he knows it will stop.because life is not only suffer.life is not a bed of thistle rods.
so I try to give the message that don't worry or cry happiness will come your way

1 comment:

  1. That's so wonderfully deep and powerful! I too have been left in the rain. In that dark avenue. But I wait it out as well. Happiness always prevails. :)

    ReplyDelete